What a Successful AMCAS Essay Looks Like

The conclusion shouldnt  parrot what you introduced earlier in the essay. â€Å"How Should You Structure Your Essays?† is excerpted from the Accepted.com special report, Ace the AMCAS Essay. To download the entire free special report, click here. In this series we’re not going to talk about the actual writing and editing (we’ll save those technical elements for another time), but we are going to suggest HOW to structure your essay. After you choose your topic (that is, the stories/experiences that we talked about in our post  WHAT Should You Include in Your AMCAS Essay?), you will need to sit down and make an outline that highlights the structure that your essay will take. A successful essay structure usually looks like this: 1. Lead or hook As a personal interest piece (see  our post Why Do We Have Personal Statements?), you want your reader to read your essay out of interest, not obligation. The best way to do this is to draw your reader in with some captivating, spellbinding opening. â€Å"Hi, my name is†¦Ã¢â‚¬  or â€Å"I was born in†¦Ã¢â‚¬  or â€Å"I want to be a doctor because†¦Ã¢â‚¬  certainly won’t cut it! Stay away from the common and ordinary.  Start with a catchy anecdote, question, bit of dialogue, or description that you think will capture your reader’s attention. Put your reader in the middle of whatever story you plan to tell. 2.  Thesis You thesis acts as the core idea of essay. While a successful essay doesn’t necessarily need to spell out a main topic (for example, you don’t need to say â€Å"the purpose of this essay is†¦Ã¢â‚¬ ), it should somehow be present in your essay – both as a guiding light to make sure that you don’t get lost in your writing and ramble on about a million different topics, and so that your reader remains focused and attentive to the point that you’re trying to convey. 3.  Body The body of your essay is the longest section. In the body you’ll present evidence (specifics that add interest and credibility to your essay and distinguish you from your competition) to support your thesis. In this section of your AMCAS essay, you’ll want to order your points (and sub-points if you have them) either chronologically, logically, or thematically. You should always put your most interesting points earlier in the essay. 4.  Conclusion Your essay’s conclusion should restate your main idea or theme. You shouldn’t parrot what you introduced earlier in the essay, but you should find a way to include it and also relate an implication or two, for example, why this theme or story is important or revealing. Also, if you asked a question at the beginning of your essay, make sure you’ve answered it by the end. By Linda Abraham, president and founder of Accepted.com and co-author of the new, definitive book on MBA admissions, MBA Admission for Smarties: The No-Nonsense Guide to Acceptance at Top Business Schools.